T1+Persuade

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 **__Tuesday 29 March 2011__** =====

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points. E ffective position statement: S.C. we can
 *  make our position and purpose clear
 *  use a rhetorical question
 *  include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 *  restate my position throughout my writing
 *  make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics


Intermediate 30 18th Avenue Tauranga

Dear Mr Diver remeber last friday you gave us a extended morning tea because we worked hard you should give us one every friday for all a hard work.

Have you noticed that when you gave us a extended morning tea we were well behaved so don’t you think that if you give us more that we will be very well behaved. Have you noticed that when you don’t give us a extended morning tea were not good behaved and there is a lot of caose.

Mr Diver when you were a kid I bet that you would think that morning teas were the best ting ever and thats what we think. You would be awesome if you do and everyone would think your like the man.

Mr Diver I can’t chance your mind but I think that you should give the extended morning tea but if you don't that is your chose not mine.